Major Comments from TC ESI to OASIS DSS-X TC on DSS-X V2 - 2 of 19 submitted by Liaison Andreas Kuehne on behalf of Sonia Companies via message 201809c00001 per attachment with accessibility issues (word file)
following steering committee call on 17/09 and addition of 2 other editorial comments, the resulting pre-agreed comments are now for ESI approval for submission to OASIS DSS-X TC by 28 September
Comment #2:
| Clause 4.2.1. “An input document can also be a <ds:Manifest>, allowing the client to handle manifest creation while using the server to create the rest of the signature.” An initial search of the keywords ds:Manifest and Manifest does not hit any sentence explaining or developing how this situation can be managed and what does “allowing the client to handle manifest creation” actually means. REQUEST: CLARIFY THE TEXT, MAYBE ADDING SOME ADDITIONAL TEXT IN THE PROCESSING CLAUSES FOR THE CASE THE INPUTDOCUMENT CONTAINS A DS:MANIFEST, IF NOT, DELETE IT. |
| AK: Just took text as it was in DSS v1.0: it was as it is. There is no problem in adding more text. Most of the text was taken from old v1.0 to prevent additional problems to compliant implementations. |
| CONCLUSION: Pass the comment to DSS-X. |