Line Type Comment
9 Editorial (ed) Reference should be [NIST Roadmap]
20 ed Remove extra words "listed in" and "sections"
35 ed Reference should be [IEC TC57]
54.5 ed Need reference for [RDDL 2.0] (cited at
55 ed Use proper OASIS citation format
62 ed Use proper OASIS citation format
74.5 ed Add reference to ISO20022, cited at
78 ed No such OASIS designation as "an approved White Paper of the EMIX TC"
113 ed Remove ":"
155 ed Brackets, not parens, around "TeMIX"
157 consistency TeMIX is defined differently from two lines above. There are several other instances of this. Is it transactive or transactional? If it is both, explain better.
255 terms Need to define ISO and RTO (and differentiate ISO from the ISO on line 37)
287 ed its → is
313 ed repeating you → repeating as you
315 ed TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document)
322 ed and → an
330 ed application the → application of the
355 ed for a one → for one
386 ed in figure 4-2, should probably be EMIX rather than Emix Product
400 ed Table 4-2 - Exercise Lead time - remove extra "to"
400 ed Table 4-2 - Strike Price - add "for" before "delivery"
406 ed Table 4-3 heading - TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document)
422 ed Table 4-5 - Exercise - step to that → step that
450 ed remove "to"
454 ed Table 5-1 - Minimum Duration Between Invocations - capitalize second "resource"; remove "has"
454 ed Table 5-1 - Response Time - from here to end of table, capitalize "resource" (8 times) (and lower-case Requests)
459 ed Table 5-2 - first line - capitalize "resource"
467 ed TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document)
479 ed n → on
480 ed is → are
481 ed remove final half-sentence ( or complete it)
485 ed Si → SI
489 ed precise → price
510 ed space before "describe"
513 ed Table 7-1 - Product Description - last sentence is unintelligible; capitalize Gluons and Interval
513 ed Sequence - Capitalize Sequence, Intervals
515 ed is → as ; capitalize Interval
524 clarity In interval B, meaning of "50 / MWh" is not clear. Are there units to "50"? Is it $50 / MWh? or 50 MWh? In interval C, what is 1.5 / MWh? Why is this representation different from Interval A?
535 ed lower case Provides
551 ed with in → within
561 ed first "load" → loads
563 ed period at end
569 ed delete last "Descriptions" and italicize the first one
584 ed while → whole
600 ed TEMIX → TeMIX (needed several places throughout document)
603 ed Nightmare paragraph - TEMIX, capitalize Product, remove extra period, remove spaces inside parens, TEMIX. TEMIX
625 ed Table 9-6 - Measurement Interval - of → if
697 ed matters → matter
743 ed Is it transactive or transactional?
744 ed It → TeMIX
759 ed When → When a
765 ed 2-hours → two hours
766 ed 2-MWh → 2 MWh
772 ed 2- hours → two hours
773 ed 2-hours → two hours
787 ed missing reference
790 ed Table 11-1 - Transactive State - "conformed to" → restricted to (??)
792 ed Table 11-2 - Granularity - space after "at"
820 ed Table 13-1 - Power Frequency - Powr → Power
857 ed Table 15-1 - Product quality - and be → can be
887 ed Capitalize gluon
899 ed remove ";"
900 ed capitalize lineage
902 ed Sentence beginning "In general, if ..." has no "then" clause. Probably - delete "if"
904 ed delete "an" ; argument → model
905 ed discussed → discussed as a
908 ed roots the → roots for the
911 ed capitalize artifact
918 ed capitalize artifact
922 ed delete "are"
928-932 ed mind your P's and Q's - capitalize Price and Quantity
1015 ed change "X-" to "x-" (lower case) (or if upper case is allowed, be explicit)
1018 ed defined → defined in
1042 ed Sentence doesn't parse. Maybe: adding → that
1102 ed Gluon - though → through (feed this one back into WS-Calendar)
1102 ed Table label should be C-1
1108 ed Table label should be C-2
1114 ed Table label should be C-3