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      Szu Chang has applied all of these minor editorial fixes.

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      Szu Chang has applied all of these minor editorial fixes.

      • I would like to commend you on the explanation given in
        SubSection: Enablers for Optimization:
      • Specifically, I am very pleased that "The focus of the SOA-EERP
        Technical Committee is on enablers for optimization and process
        improvement rather than on the complete EERP environment." This
        was an unspoken concern of mine early on, and it puts the entire
        complement of specifications into a sound perspective. (Note: I
        didn't intend to start with agreement and commendation. I must be
        slipping!")
      • In the second paragraph of SubSection: *Enablers for Optimization:
        *the parenthetical phrase "(how to represent cost, time, and
        cost)," is clumsy. Perhaps "(how to represent cost, time, and
        intended result)," might be better. (Note: the term we use in the
        SOA-RAF for intended "result" would be intended "Real World Effect.")
      • Suggestion for next to last paragraph of SubSection: *Status of
        Standards Process:* "These XML vocabulary specifications address
        the exchange of information that models the business
        characteristics of a service, permits assertions or queries
        related to the credibility of the service and its provider, and
        the establishment of agreements about the use of business service.

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            Szu Chang (Inactive)
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            Paul Yang (Inactive)
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