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Type:
Sub-task
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Resolution: Fixed
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Priority:
Major
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Affects Version/s: cd03
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Component/s: PR01 Comments
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None
- First and second sentences in Paragraph three of SubSection:
"Service providers offer business services. Each service
provider may offer the same service but with different bQoS and
Ratings." "provider(s) provide" is just a bit clumsy--stylistic
consideration only. - /Description/ column entries for numbers 5 through 12 of the
Tabular presentation of messages in SubSection: *Message Exchange
Example:* are in a larger text size than the rest of the tabular
material. - /Description/ for number 8 in tabular presentation of messages in
SubSection: Message Exchange Example needs correction : ...SLA
Request message... - /Description/ for number 11 in tabular presentation of messages in
SubSection: Message Exchange Example: doesn't make sense to me:
"Service Requester sends SLA Request message to the Service
Providers to obtain the commitments from the Service Providers
for those no SLA service in the set". - Suggestion: in last paragraph on page 10 SubSection: Message
Exchange Example: "We conclude this section with a sequence
diagram."
