PR08-E5 SOA-EERP-bQoS-Spec-cd03.pdf

XMLWordPrintable

    • Type: Sub-task
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Priority: Major
    • cd04
    • Affects Version/s: cd03
    • Component/s: PR01 Comments
    • None
    • Hide

      Fixed all those minor editorial problems on WD09 of bQoS spec @ http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/38435/SOA-EERP-bQoS-Specwd09-diff-cd03.pdf

      bullet #2: Line has deleted and no onger apply.

      Line 13-14

      13 EERP applies the well-known technique for service discovery, composition, simulation, and optimization
      14 techniques in a novel way to improve business results.

      The issue can be closed.

      Show
      Fixed all those minor editorial problems on WD09 of bQoS spec @ http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/38435/SOA-EERP-bQoS-Specwd09-diff-cd03.pdf bullet #2: Line has deleted and no onger apply. Line 13-14 13 EERP applies the well-known technique for service discovery, composition, simulation, and optimization 14 techniques in a novel way to improve business results. The issue can be closed.
    • Hide

      Editorial changes applied.

      Show
      Editorial changes applied.

      • Line 6: grammatical error: "...improve business results. It models
        the business process and the range of potential services, then
        guides..."
      • Line 10: grammatical error: "...an optimal end-to-end solution."
      • Lines 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 144, 145: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 148, 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 188: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
        cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 275: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
        cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 327: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
        cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 340: grammatical error: "... This is an extensibility
        mechanism to allow different (extensible) properties..."
      • Lines 451, 452 and 453 are formatted in a different typeface/font
        from the style used throughout the rest of specification for that
        kind of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
      • Lines 465-467: grammatical errors: "... implementation silently
        ignores unrecognized attributes where any attribute is
        allowed, or silently ignores unrecognized elements where any
        element is allowed, it should be considered as interoperable
        implementation."

            Assignee:
            Szu Chang (Inactive)
            Reporter:
            Paul Yang (Inactive)
            Votes:
            0 Vote for this issue
            Watchers:
            0 Start watching this issue

              Created:
              Updated:
              Resolved: