• Type: Sub-task
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Priority: Major
    • cd04
    • Affects Version/s: cd03
    • Component/s: PR01 Comments
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      Fixed all those minor editorial problems in WD09 of bRating spec, http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/38429/SOA-EERP-bRating-Spec-wd09-diff-cd03.pdf:

      • line 93-93, editing error, "the is defined", please remove "the" to change
        Line 91-92
      • fix "Service Provider fulfill", either Providers fulfill or "provider fulfills"

      Line 119

      • Changed all "elements/parameters" to "elements"

      No "elements/parameters" found any more.

      • /rt:BRaing/Performance/QualityAssestionEvaluation, "Assestion" is not word.

      Line 118, 157

      • 5.1 Service Rating with an Engineering Service change to 5.1Service Rating for an Engineering Service

      Line 461

      • changed Style problems - text, t char in some places, Normal in others, should be "Body Text" or "Text Body". Violates
        template.
        [ Show » ] Szu Chang added a comment - 23/Jun/10 07:01 PM Fixed in WD09 of bRating spec, http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/38429/SOA-EERP-bRating-Spec-wd09-diff-cd03.pdf: - line 93-93, editing error, "the is defined", please remove "the" to change Line 91-92 - fix "Service Provider fulfill", either Providers fulfill or "provider fulfills" Line 119 - Changed all "elements/parameters" to "elements" No "elements/parameters" found any more. - /rt:BRaing/Performance/QualityAssestionEvaluation, "Assestion" is not word. Line 118, 157 - 5.1 Service Rating with an Engineering Service change to 5.1Service Rating for an Engineering Service Line 461 - changed Style problems - text, t char in some places, Normal in others, should be "Body Text" or "Text Body". Violates template.
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      Fixed all those minor editorial problems in WD09 of bRating spec, http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/38429/SOA-EERP-bRating-Spec-wd09-diff-cd03.pdf: line 93-93, editing error, "the is defined", please remove "the" to change Line 91-92 fix "Service Provider fulfill", either Providers fulfill or "provider fulfills" Line 119 Changed all "elements/parameters" to "elements" No "elements/parameters" found any more. /rt:BRaing/Performance/QualityAssestionEvaluation, "Assestion" is not word. Line 118, 157 5.1 Service Rating with an Engineering Service change to 5.1Service Rating for an Engineering Service Line 461 changed Style problems - text, t char in some places, Normal in others, should be "Body Text" or "Text Body". Violates template. [ Show » ] Szu Chang added a comment - 23/Jun/10 07:01 PM Fixed in WD09 of bRating spec, http://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/38429/SOA-EERP-bRating-Spec-wd09-diff-cd03.pdf: - line 93-93, editing error, "the is defined", please remove "the" to change Line 91-92 - fix "Service Provider fulfill", either Providers fulfill or "provider fulfills" Line 119 - Changed all "elements/parameters" to "elements" No "elements/parameters" found any more. - /rt:BRaing/Performance/QualityAssestionEvaluation, "Assestion" is not word. Line 118, 157 - 5.1 Service Rating with an Engineering Service change to 5.1Service Rating for an Engineering Service Line 461 - changed Style problems - text, t char in some places, Normal in others, should be "Body Text" or "Text Body". Violates template.
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      Editorial changes applied.

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      Editorial changes applied.

      • Line 3: Suggestion "... information exchange on business
        *credibility *reliability and reputation..."
      • Line 8: Suggestiion "The credibility, reliability and reputation..."
      • Line 85: Suggestion: "_*The XML vocabulary for Business Rating is
        defined in the XML Schema for this specification with several
        specific rating measurement indicators.*_"
      • Lines 111-113 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
        style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
        of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
      • Lines 111-113: grammatical error (111, 112) and suggestion (112):
        "Performance:QualityAssestionEvaluation that will provide a
        mechanism for Service Rating Entities to render their
        evaluation for how well the Service Provider fulfills the
        Quality Assertion(s) of its service."
      • Line 131: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
        cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 137, 138: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
        cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 145, 146: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 149: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized elements MAY cause
        a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 157: remove white space in element name: An aggregated
        number, in <rt:RatingNumeric> element."
      • Line 187: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
        cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 202, 203: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 212, 213: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 218, 219: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 226-228 re formatted in a different typeface/font from the
        style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
        of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
      • Lines 227, 228: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 234-235: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
        cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 284: Suggestion: "_*Unlike *_the Rating element..."
      • Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 337, 338: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 341, 342: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 351, 352: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 361, 362: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 369, 370: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 376, 377: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 383, 384: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 390, 391: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 393, 394: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored.
      • Lines 453, 454 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
        style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
        of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
      • Lines 458-460 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
        style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
        of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
      • Lines 579-582 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
        style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
        of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
      • Line 609-611: grammatical errors, suggestion: "...implementation
        silently ignores unrecognized attributes where any attribute
        is allowed, or silently _*ignores *_unrecognized elements where
        any element is allowed, should be considered an interoperable
        implementation."

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            Szu Chang (Inactive)
            Reporter:
            Paul Yang (Inactive)
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