• Type: Sub-task
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Priority: Major
    • cd04
    • Affects Version/s: cd03
    • Component/s: PR01 Comments
    • None

      • Lines 10, 11: grammatical error: "...to select an optimal
        end-to-end solution."
      • Lines 134, 135: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 149, 150: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 156, 157: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 160, 161: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 200, 201: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 216, 217: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 220: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
        cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 262, 263: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 265, 267, 269, 271, 273, 275: Suggestion: "Describes
        available operations..."
      • Lines 281, 282: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 285: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
        cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 320, 321: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 328, 326: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 332: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes MAY
        cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 352, 353: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 360, 361: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 387, 388: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 394, 395: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 401, 402: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 408, 409: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Line 412 is formatted in a different typeface/font from the style
        used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind of
        body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
      • Note the use of a different typeface for the name of elements
        immediately after a Numbered Section Title in the following
        example does not sufficiently emphasize the name and causes visual
        dissonance, and some text passages continue using that different
        typeface so, IF this is an artifact of the OASIS specification
        template it would be a good idea to point it out, or else use
        italic or bold for emphasis because a different typeface that is
        not significantly different just looks like an unintentional error.
      • Lines 502, 503: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 583, 584: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 599, 600: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 628, 629: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 635, 636: grammatical error: "... Unrecognized attributes
        MAY cause a fault or be silently ignored."
      • Lines 776-778 are formatted in a different typeface/font from the
        style used throughout the rest of the specification for that kind
        of body text and should be changed to match the overall style.
      • Line 806-808: grammatical errors: "...implementation silently
        ignores unrecognized attributes where any attribute is
        allowed, or silently ignores unrecognized elements where any
        element is allowed, should be considered an interoperable
        implementation."

            Assignee:
            Szu Chang (Inactive)
            Reporter:
            Paul Yang (Inactive)
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