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  1. Technical Advisory Board
  2. TAB-1620

3.1.1 Data Types - Clearer prose?

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    • Type: Bug
    • Status: New
    • Priority: Minor
    • Resolution: Unresolved
    • Affects Version/s: Open Command and Control (OpenC2) Language Specification Version 1.0
    • Fix Version/s: None
    • Component/s: None
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      Terms like "valid," "information model," "constructed," etc., are vastly overrated. Avoid them unless necessary. 

      Try:

      "The data types used in OpenC2 messages are:"

       as a model. 

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      Terms like "valid," "information model," "constructed," etc., are vastly overrated. Avoid them unless necessary.  Try: "The data types used in OpenC2 messages are:"  as a model. 

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      With standards, those who write the least, write the best. 

      Consider: "The syntax of valid OpenC2 messages is defined using an information model constructed from the data types presented here:"

      Compare:

      "The data types used in OpenC2 messages are:"

      BTW, your primitives are defined in XMLSchema part 2. No change necessary but we should all reference and not define data types.

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              Reporter:
              patrick Patrick Durusau
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