Review comments from Ram Jeyaraman

Front Page:

• Add Working Draft number.
• Suggest changing "Thu 11/24/2011" to "Thursday 11/24/11". Avoid using the short form of the day.
• Suggest changing "OASIS AMQP TC" to "OASIS AMQP Technical Committee", in all occurrences.
• Suggest changing "Additional Artifcats" to "Additional Artifacts".
• Suggest changing Part 1: Types - "the AMQP type" to "AMQP type". Similarly, in the following bullet items pertaining to Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5.
• Footer: Add a space between copyright symbol and "OASIS".

:Copyright:

• "Please see http://www.oasisopen.org/who/trademark.php (http://www.oasis-open.org/who/trademark.php) for above guidance". The hyperlink is repeated. Need to check with OASIS staff and correct this.

Section 3.4: Suggest adding periods after end of each bullet item.

Part 4 Transactions: In all figures, the letter 'F' in the term "TRANSFER" uses a different font, and a result appears smaller than the surrounding characters. Suggest fixing this.