4.3.2.4 services - "application in"?

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      change: This node describes the services that the application in the PDP requires in order to function
      to: This node describes the services required by the application.

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      change: This node describes the services that the application in the PDP requires in order to function to: This node describes the services required by the application.
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      Incorporated the proposal above as directed by the motion in the comments: https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/camp/download.php/51494/camp-spec-v1.1-wd31.doc

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      Incorporated the proposal above as directed by the motion in the comments: https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/camp/download.php/51494/camp-spec-v1.1-wd31.doc

      From the comment list: https://lists.oasis-open.org/archives/camp-comment/201309/msg00078.html
      TAB issue: https://tools.oasis-open.org/issues/browse/TAB-93

      4.3.2.4 currently reads:


              • This node describes the services that the application in the PDP requires in order to function.

      "in the PDP" don't we mean "described in a PDP"?

      Suggest:


              • The services node specifies the services required by an application described in a PDP.

      Removes the ambiguity of "in order to function." Don't know what "function" means and it could vary from application to application.

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            Gilbert Pilz (Inactive)
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            Gilbert Pilz (Inactive)
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