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A ServiceSpecification outlines a service that the application contained within the PDP requires in order to function. This outline is not intended to be a complete description of the service but, instead, delineate those characteristics that are significant to the application.

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A ServiceSpecification non-literal describes a service used by the application.

Note: The description may not be complete but may contain only characteristics of significance to a particular application.

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change: A ServiceSpecification outlines a service that the application contained within the PDP requires in order to function. This outline is not intended to be a complete description of the service but, instead, delineate those characteristics that are significant to the application. to: A ServiceSpecification non-literal describes a service used by the application. Note: The description may not be complete but may contain only characteristics of significance to a particular application.

4.3.4 ServiceSpecification currently reads:

- - - - A ServiceSpecification outlines a service that the application contained within the PDP requires in order to function. This outline is not intended to be a complete description of the service but, instead, delineate those characteristics that are significant to the application. This type has the following, general representation:

outlines? I got the impression a ServiceSpecification is identifying a service? Yes?

If that is correct, suggest:

- - - - A ServiceSpecification node describes a service used by an application identified in a PDP.

Note: The description may not be complete but may contain only characteristics of significance to a particular application.
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