[CAMP-164] Response to call for comments: "application packag", "_uri", and "DP example" - OASIS Technical Committees Issue Tracker

XML

Word

Printable

Resolution:

Hide

Resolved in WD 40.
From 12th March 2014:

editorial fixes
Motion: resolve ~~CAMP-164~~ with the changes in the description; m: Gil, s: Jacques
Motion Carries

Show
Resolved in WD 40. From 12th March 2014: editorial fixes Motion: resolve CAMP-164 with the changes in the description; m: Gil, s: Jacques Motion Carries

1. In section 1.3 Example, it talks about "application package". Is this the same thing as a "Plan resource" (compare with section 2.3)?

3. Example 5 (s4.2.2.1) still says "DP" while example 6 has changed this to "Plan"

Some spelling/grammar points which aren't part of changes from the previous comment period:

4. Section 2.7 Representation skew: "it exists but it an intermediate state" should be "it exists but in an intermediate state".

5. In various places the informal spelling "thru" is used. I would expect this to be "through".