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  1. OASIS Energy Market Information Exchange (eMIX) TC
  2. EMIX-346 Collector for Spelling, Grammatical, and Text Issues wd22 20110404
  3. EMIX-366

Section 10 Spelling, Grammatical, Textual

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    • Status: Closed
    • Priority: Minor
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Affects Version/s: wd22
    • Fix Version/s: wd23
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      Revamped minor edits

      Suggest "confusing paragraph" be replaced with:

      While Power Ramps are generic, specific instances are subject to different conformance rules.

      For a Generation Resource, Staging Ramps are processed in order of increasing End Power. The quantity of End Power MUST be greater than the quantity of the Begin Power for each Ramp in the Staging Ramp. Recovery Ramps are processed in order of decreasing End Power. The quantity of End Power MUST be less than the quantity of Begin Power for each Ramp in the Recovery Ramp.

      For a Load Resource, Staging Ramps are processed in order of decreasing End Power. The quantity of End Power MUST be less than the quantity of Begin Power for each Ramp in the Staging Ramp. Recovery Ramps are processed in order of increasing End Power. The quantity of End Power MUST be greater than the quantity of the Begin Power for each Ramp in the Recovery Ramp.

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      Revamped minor edits Suggest "confusing paragraph" be replaced with: While Power Ramps are generic, specific instances are subject to different conformance rules. For a Generation Resource, Staging Ramps are processed in order of increasing End Power. The quantity of End Power MUST be greater than the quantity of the Begin Power for each Ramp in the Staging Ramp. Recovery Ramps are processed in order of decreasing End Power. The quantity of End Power MUST be less than the quantity of Begin Power for each Ramp in the Recovery Ramp. For a Load Resource, Staging Ramps are processed in order of decreasing End Power. The quantity of End Power MUST be less than the quantity of Begin Power for each Ramp in the Staging Ramp. Recovery Ramps are processed in order of increasing End Power. The quantity of End Power MUST be greater than the quantity of the Begin Power for each Ramp in the Recovery Ramp.

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      Section 10 issues:

      Title should say "Energy Resources" rather than ...Offer Descriptions... - use is more broad.

      Early in section add "Resource describe the performance envelope--the maximum that a resource can deliver. The dynamic status of a resource can be managed with interaction protocols (see e.g. EiFeedback in [EnergyInteroperation]"

      NOTE it is an open issue whether to include "the needle" for a resource. I think that extending in the message and management system is the right approach, so I haven't raised the issue in EMIX.

      628 Latin phrase should be in italics. Consider also for ex ante, etc

      663 This section describes Base Resources (671, table caption). This should be "Resource Description".

      Also in section, these are not exactly "subclasses" but "extensions" - consider the terminology and make uniform through the document.

      680 "Power Ramps are conformed based upon the type of appearance they make" - reword. Sentence is unclear as well as complex.

      686 Remember, resources can be used without offering them to market. Offering to market is a benefit of using resources, limiting mismatch, but resources have applications beyond markets. Applies to whole section.

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              Toby.Considine Toby Considine
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