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    • Type: Improvement
    • Status: Closed
    • Priority: Minor
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Affects Version/s: wd28
    • Fix Version/s: wd29
    • Component/s: spec
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      Chapter 2 Editorial

    • Proposal:
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      157 Capitalize "product" --> note to Editor: capitalize "Price" and "Product" throughout document per line 2 of the standard where used as keywords
      175 Add sentence: "Users of EMIX are strongly encouraged to become familiar with TeMIX when considering this standard." or something along those lines.
      208 Change to "For the first, one must start..."
      214 Make "[WS-Calendar]" appear in boldface
      214 Delete "(moved to Appendix E)"
      217 Capitalize "warrants" --> note to Editor: capitalize throughout document where used as keyword
      237 Delete "Extrinsic information conveyed within the envelope includes supporting information."
      236-237 Delete line break and make "For example, a purchaser..." be the next sentence after "...without opening the envelope."
      253 Change to "...Price and Product information."
      255 Change to "...the Parties agree to a Transaction..." --> note to Editor: capitalize "Parties", "Party" and "Transaction" throughout document where used as keywords
      258 Capitalize "tender" --> note to Editor: capitalize "tender" throughout document where used as keyword
      259 Delete "EMIX Base and its Derivatives," at the beginning of the line
      274 Delete one of the two occurrences of "Power Transport Product Description", put the remaining one in quotation marks. --> note to Editor: the MS Word cross-reference attempts are not properly configured to pickup the Section number.
      281 Capitalized "verification" --> note to Editor: capitalize "tender" throughout document

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      Line Comment 157 Capitalize "product" --> note to Editor: capitalize "Price" and "Product" throughout document per line 2 of the standard where used as keywords 175 Add sentence: "Users of EMIX are strongly encouraged to become familiar with TeMIX when considering this standard." or something along those lines. 208 Change to "For the first, one must start..." 214 Make " [WS-Calendar] " appear in boldface 214 Delete "(moved to Appendix E)" 217 Capitalize "warrants" --> note to Editor: capitalize throughout document where used as keyword 237 Delete "Extrinsic information conveyed within the envelope includes supporting information." 236-237 Delete line break and make "For example, a purchaser..." be the next sentence after "...without opening the envelope." 253 Change to "...Price and Product information." 255 Change to "...the Parties agree to a Transaction..." --> note to Editor: capitalize "Parties", "Party" and "Transaction" throughout document where used as keywords 258 Capitalize "tender" --> note to Editor: capitalize "tender" throughout document where used as keyword 259 Delete "EMIX Base and its Derivatives," at the beginning of the line 274 Delete one of the two occurrences of "Power Transport Product Description", put the remaining one in quotation marks. --> note to Editor: the MS Word cross-reference attempts are not properly configured to pickup the Section number. 281 Capitalized "verification" --> note to Editor: capitalize "tender" throughout document
    • Resolution:
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      Accepted proposal except as noted in comments.

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      Accepted proposal except as noted in comments.

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          • Assignee:
            toby.considine Toby Considine (Inactive)
            Reporter:
            afsnyder Aaron Snyder (Inactive)
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