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    • Type: Improvement
    • Status: Closed
    • Priority: Minor
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Affects Version/s: wd28
    • Fix Version/s: wd29
    • Component/s: spec
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      Chapter 3 Editorial

    • Proposal:
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      300 Change title of second column to "Description"
      304 Change to "...those abstract types..."
      314 Change heading of second column to "Description"
      324 Change heading of second column to "Description"
      336 Change heading of second column to "Description"
      336 Change to "...Service Area expresses locations or..."
      339 Missing reference to Power Chapter
      339 Change to "Other markets can..."
      345 Change to "...defines three power types..."
      368 Change to "...well-known semantics of [RFC5545]."
      369-370 Change to "...certain terms defined in [WS-Calendar], the reader may have difficulty achieving complete understanding

      of their use in this standard."
      370 This phrase is not quite true: "The table below provides summary definitions of certain..."; not all the language in the table is a "definition".

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      300 Change title of second column to "Description" 304 Change to "...those abstract types..." 314 Change heading of second column to "Description" 324 Change heading of second column to "Description" 336 Change heading of second column to "Description" 336 Change to "...Service Area expresses locations or..." 339 Missing reference to Power Chapter 339 Change to "Other markets can..." 345 Change to "...defines three power types..." 368 Change to "...well-known semantics of [RFC5545] ." 369-370 Change to "...certain terms defined in [WS-Calendar] , the reader may have difficulty achieving complete understanding of their use in this standard." 370 This phrase is not quite true: "The table below provides summary definitions of certain..."; not all the language in the table is a "definition".
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          • Assignee:
            toby.considine Toby Considine (Inactive)
            Reporter:
            afsnyder Aaron Snyder (Inactive)
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