There are 30 specific recommendations in the "Specific Recommendations" section of the submitted Hammerstrom paper. I have numbered them all for traceability as I recombine them into specific issues. The original white paper/submission can be read in the URI under "environment"
13. Lines 355 – 6: Editing needed.
14. Lines 349 – 362: Recommend deleting since content was addressed by EMIX and is permitted as stated in Line 363.
15. Line 376: Editing needed.
25. Lines 596 – 7: Editing needed.
29. Section 12.1: Why must this [EI] content be duplicated and not included simply by reference?