Major There are 30 specific recommendations in the "Specific Recommendations" section of the submitted Hammerstrom paper. I have numbered them all for traceability as I recombine them into specific issues. The original white paper/submission can be read in the URI under "environment"
13. Lines 355 – 6: Editing needed.
14. Lines 349 – 362: Recommend deleting since content was addressed by EMIX and is permitted as stated in Line 363.
15. Line 376: Editing needed.
25. Lines 596 – 7: Editing needed.
29. Section 12.1: Why must this [EI] content be duplicated and not included simply by reference?
Transition all APPLIED to CLOSED per Energy Interoperation TC Motion April 28, 2022.
The TC believes that for the light, agile message model to support emergent behaviors, complex chains of optional behavior, perhaps embedding a single approach, should not be hidden inside seeming simple messages. Accordingly, the text indicates that if an Actor "wants" particular products or know products if warrants cannot be met, then it should interact with the market to achieve that outcome.
The indicated text does, however, take too long to say too little, and not precisely.