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  1. OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
  2. MQTT-100

Editorial comments on the Abstract (page 1)



    • Type: Improvement
    • Status: Closed
    • Priority: Minor
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Affects Version/s: 3.1.1
    • Fix Version/s: 3.1.1
    • Component/s: edits
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      1. line 22 These sentence "These characteristics make it ideal for use in constrained environments, for example, but not limited to:" reads awkwardly. How about a splitting it into two, , "These characteristics make it ideal for use in constrained environments,. These include environments:

      2. Line 24 uses the word "unreliable". When writing the charter we tried to avoid that word, as it has negative connotations if you are a telco. Actiually the charter provides the following overall summary..

      "Providing a lightweight publish/subscribe reliable messaging transport protocol suitable for communication in M2M/IoT contexts where a small code footprint is required and/or network bandwidth is at a premium." which we could use somewhere on this page.

      3. Line 29. Add words "The use of" at the start

      4. Line 32 explicitly mentions TCP/IP.

      5. Line 35. This refers to QoS 0 as "At most once" but then goes on to say that Duplication can occur... This is actually a wider issue as this wording appears elsewhere in the spec

      6. Line 43. I suggest deleting the words "using the Last Will and Testament feature" , since we don't use this term anywhere else.




            • Assignee:
              ragupta2 Rahul Gupta
              PeterNiblett Peter Niblett
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