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  1. OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
  2. MQTT-206

Summary of editorial issues Security SC WD04

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    • Type: Bug
    • Status: Closed
    • Priority: Major
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Affects Version/s: None
    • Fix Version/s: None
    • Component/s: SecuritySC_edits
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      line 99, provide list of the five items as a para after the ':'
      line 107, an organization's --> their
      line 131, provide bulleted list as new para after 'parts:'
      line 139, implementation/operations --> implementation and operations
      line 140, Functions --> functions
      line 140, --Identify --> : Identify
      line 144, References --> references
      line 160, there are a number of terms in "quotes", would italics improve readability ?
      line 176, – Identify ..., Recover – --> (Identify ..., Recover)
      line 180, The non-exhaustive --> A non-exhaustive
      line 186, reduce Cybersecurity risk --> mitigate cybersecurity risk
      line 216, legal/regulatory --> legal and regulatory
      line 222, business/mission --> business
      line 228, The following steps --> The following sub sections
      line 238, overall --> their overall
      line 253, Organizations also may --> Organizations may
      line 253, The Organization also may --> The organization may
      line 260, cost/benefit --> "cost benefit"
      line 273, 5 --> five
      line 274, prevalent --> used
      line 279, consider: should be customized and read in conjunction with information sources relevant to an ...
      line 297, regarding --> in response to

      just for consistency between documents:
      line 8, Raphael Cohn --> Raphael J Cohn (as per core MQTT spec)

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            • Assignee:
              louis.lamoureux Louis-P Lamoureux (Inactive)
              Reporter:
              coppen Richard Coppen
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