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  1. OASIS Message Queuing Telemetry Transport (MQTT) TC
  2. MQTT-45

summary of editorial issues from read through of WD07

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    • Type: Improvement
    • Status: Closed
    • Priority: Minor
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Affects Version/s: 3.1.1
    • Fix Version/s: 3.1.1
    • Component/s: edits
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      line 35: change TCPIP network, to operating environment
      line 42: remove bracketed section
      line 254: remove "allows applications to exchange messages with specific levels of reliability. It" and restructure introduction sentence for clarity
      line 292: make it clear that the DUP flag must be set to 0 if QOS 0 messages
      line 351: remove MultiByte length header and reword in terms of remaining length (global change: help with readability and simplicity)
      In addition remove confusion around 'digit' in the algorithm (i.e., resolve MQTT-29)
      line 471: Section 2.3 moved to start of Section 2 as part of the introduction as it is a key concept
      line 431: Non-normative content promoted --> client server pairs must be able to manage overlapping packetIDs
      line 486: remove surrogate pairs removed as not longer relevant (machine representation v wire format)
      line 493: Storing state subsection moved to Section 4
      line 1293: Section 4 "Flows" changed to "Implementation consideration"
      line 500+ "MQTT Control Packets": move description of terms and discussion under correct subsections
      line 501+ restructure CONNECT subsection for clarity
      line 750: refactor existing CONNECT processing steps under 3.1.4 "Response"
      line 880: remove QoS descriptions and refer to 4.1 "QoS levels and flows"

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            • Assignee:
              Andrew_Banks Andrew Banks
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              coppen Richard Coppen
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