Consider whether each use of "Vendors" should be replaced by "implementers", "systems" or similar words as appropriate.

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    • Type: Improvement
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Priority: Minor
    • OBIX 1.1 WD27
    • Affects Version/s: OBIX 1.1 PR02
    • Component/s: OBIX 1.1 Specification
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      Toby Considine

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      670 should be OBIX Servers, because the Server is the one executing the request and deciding what to present in the response to the Client upon part of the batch request failing.

      Section 7 Tbl 7-1 - insert suggested replacement text

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      670 should be OBIX Servers, because the Server is the one executing the request and deciding what to present in the response to the Client upon part of the batch request failing. Section 7 Tbl 7-1 - insert suggested replacement text

      The language Vendors, while tied to OBIX's legacy as a shim above several brand-name control systems, is often distracting or limiting. In particular:

      Line 670: Perhaps "It is up to OBIX Clients to..."

      Section 7 table 7-1. "It is likely that many vendors...". Suggest: "OBIX will be used to interact with existing and future control systems based on statically-typed languages such as..."

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