Editorial Issue on lines 111-112

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    • Type: Improvement
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Priority: Trivial
    • OBIX 1.1 WD38
    • Affects Version/s: OBIX 1.1 WD20
    • Component/s: OBIX 1.1 Specification
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      Chris Bogen

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      Suggest re-phrasing the identified sentence. Possible replacement -
      Contracts define the majority of the conformance rules of this specification.

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      Suggest re-phrasing the identified sentence. Possible replacement - Contracts define the majority of the conformance rules of this specification.
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      How about this?
      Contracts are flexible and powerful enough that they are even used to define the majority of the conformance rules in this specification.

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      How about this? Contracts are flexible and powerful enough that they are even used to define the majority of the conformance rules in this specification.

      The sentence beginning on line 111 and ending on line 112 is redundant. "The majority of the OBIX specification is actually defined in OBIX itself through Contracts."

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            Toby Considine (Inactive)
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            Chris Bogen (Inactive)
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