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  1. OASIS Open Building Information Exchange (oBIX) TC
  2. OBIX-84

Line 69, editorial, change passive voice to active voice

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    • Type: Improvement
    • Status: Closed
    • Priority: Trivial
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Affects Version/s: SOAP WD07
    • Fix Version/s: None
    • Component/s: OBIX 1.1 Specification
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      Revise to: The service element, binding a SOAP server instance to a network address, is missing from the standard OBIX WSDL.

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      Revise to: The service element, binding a SOAP server instance to a network address, is missing from the standard OBIX WSDL.

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      In lines 69-70,
      "Missing from the standard oBIX WSDL is the service element. This element binds a SOAP server instance with a network address."

      The first sentence is in an awkward passive voice and the second sentence uses "with" when "to" is more appropriate.

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            • Assignee:
              mjung Markus Jung (Inactive)
              Reporter:
              chris.bogen Chris Bogen (Inactive)
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