Feedback:

• It would help if JSON Format 4.5.12 would not simply generically refer to OData Version 4.01 Part 2: URL Conventions and explicitly state that the stream property URL conventions are the same as for other properties. I see that 4.7 Addressing a Property Value actually implicitly makes such a statement but a more explicit statement would still help.
• Since examples speak more than 1000 words I would most appreciate if in 11.2.4 Requesting Individual Properties or in 11.4.8 Managing Stream Properties, an example could be added. In 11.4.8, one could then add one example with the canonical URL and one with a different mediaReadLink.