Trivial The section 2 "Overview" of the workproduct [odata-core-v1.0-wd01-part1-protocol-2012-11-16.doc](https://www.oasis-open.org/committees/download.php/47501/odata-core-v1.0-wd01-part1-protocol-2012-11-16.doc) currently contains as fourth list item in the list following the first paragraph on page 7:
- Editing: creating, editing, and deleting data.
Maybe
- Editing: creating, updating, and deleting data.
should be a better and also non-recursive description 
One might also suggest 'changing' instead of 'updating', but the latter is IMO better matching the way we do things.
We do not grab and edit in-place, but as I understand the client sends a revision n+1 of some data chunk with a unique target path (id) which replaces the existing stuff in the data store served i.e. update any revision there not being n+1.