1) Remove "and in this case MUST place that CSDL document inside an EDMX wrapper" from the last sentence of section 1 to avoid forward-references to the wrapper term. 2) Replace the current direct text of section 4 with: "An OData service exposes a single entity model. This model may consist of several schemas, and these schemas may be distributed over several physical locations. The entity model wrapper provides a single point of access to these parts by including them directly or referencing their physical locations. It can be accessed by sending a GET request to <serviceRoot>/$metadata." 3) Remove first paragraph of section 4.1 as its content is now contained in the preceding section. Accepted: https://www.oasis-open.org/apps/org/workgroup/odata/download.php/47020/latest/odata_meeting-9_on-20120927_minutes.html