In Part 1 section 3.18
1. Change the title to "3.18 White Space Processing"
It is not necessary to define what the white-space characters are here. Replace the first two paragraphs (everything preceding the Note) with
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ODF processing of whitespace characters is in conformance with the provisions of [XML 1.0].
In addition, OpenDocument Consumers shall ignore all element children ([RNG] section 5, Data Model) of elements defined in this specification that are strings consisting entirely of whitespace characters and which do not satisfy a pattern of the OpenDocument schema definititon for the element.
Additional treatment of occurrences of whitespace characters depends on the provisions for specific elements, attributes, and their datatypes in this specification.
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[Ed.Note1 If it is important to include the list, it can be before the last parapgraph above. The introductory sentence should be "The white space characters are [XML1.0]:" There is no reason to mention EOL in the text, since it has notihing to do with this provision and is not raised in [XML1.0].].
Replace the Note with the following text:
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Note: There are special OpenDocument rules for the reduction of whitespace sequences to single space characters in the text obtained from <text>, <text:h> and their element children. See 6.1.2.
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[Ed.Note 2: It might be preferable to say "... the character data obtained from ..." to be more consistent with 6.1.2 but I am not certain of that. --dh.]
[Ed Note 3: This does not reflect the impact of foreign elements, where we don't know if they have character-string children or not.]