Missing citation, unnecssary repetition

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    • Resolution: Unresolved
    • Priority: Minor
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      For all three versions, simple, technical and all-inclusive, revise to use a citation to [RFC2119], drop the URL and consider dropping the repetition of MUST, etc.

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      For all three versions, simple, technical and all-inclusive, revise to use a citation to [RFC2119] , drop the URL and consider dropping the repetition of MUST, etc.

      1.2 Terminology reads in part:

      *****
      ...as described in RFC 2119 (http://www.ietf.org/rfc/rfc2119.txt).
      *****

      Shouldn't RFC 2119 be a reference to [RFC2119] which appears in your normative references? Moreover, if so, you can drop the parens and URL here.

      BTW, it isn't a big issue but I would drop the repetition of the definitions of MUST, etc. Those are already stated in RFC 2119 and nothing is gained by repeating them here.

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            Patrick Durusau
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