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Type: Bug
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Status: New
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Priority: Minor
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Resolution: Unresolved
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Affects Version/s: Authentication Step-Up Protocol and Metadata Version 1.0
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Fix Version/s: None
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Component/s: None
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Labels:None
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Environment:
Style
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Proposal:
Under 1 Introduction, the text reads:
[All text is normative unless otherwise labeled]
That's from the boiler plate in the template.
To avoid a hanging paragraph (which you do except for 2 Landscape and Context), I would insert after the terminology paragraph in 1.2 something to the effect:
All text is normative except for labeled examples and notes.
Then, I would amend the title for 6 to read:
Trust Elevation Sequence (Example) and remove the first sentence that reads: "This section contains a non-normative, simple Trust Elevation use case and sequence."
The next sentence could start (style suggestion):
Note that the specific structure -> The specific structure....