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    • Type: Improvement
    • Status: Closed
    • Priority: Major
    • Resolution: Fixed
    • Affects Version/s: pr02
    • Fix Version/s: wd21
    • Component/s: spec
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      Line 837 - delete "[reference]" and insert the appropriate reference Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Line 59 - The current revision is 03 (http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-cal-resource-schema-03). Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Line 71, 76, 78, 80, 82, 84, 86 - RFC 2447, 3339, 4791, 4918, 5545, 5546, 5988 are a "proposed standard" Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Line 74 - RFC 2616 are a "draft standard". This is the state before "internet standard". Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Why are there normative references to WS-Management, WS-Security, DP-WS, XRD, and others including e.g. lines 71, 74, and more? If there is no use of something in a document it seems strange to label it a normative reference. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Line 93 - Can you have a normative reference to a non-normative document? Date also seems off. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Line 34 - there is no reference for [EITC] and [EMIX]; these should be non-normative references. Likewise EDXL and oBIX on lines 35-36 Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Line 59 - Is Calendar Resource Schema truly a normative reference? Where is it cited or used? Sub-task Closed Michael Douglass (Inactive)
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      Line 105 - Is the "Draft xCal" superseded by the contributions and the work in the schemas that are part of this work product? Reword. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Line 119 - The reference should be something like [NIST Framework] - the title has been turned into a reference shorthand by bolding it. Other places this happened is on lines 59, 105 (should be [xCal Draft]), 119, 124, 131,, and maybe 136. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Line 124 - I believe that this should be [NAESB_PAP04] and reference both the first and second release. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Line 180 - There is no normative reference to which [XCAL] is connected. Perhaps "xCAL Draft" is what's meant? Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Line 343 - "granularity" is not title case; capitalize. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Line 253 "start at a particular instant of time UTC" does not read well. Where is a definition of the acronym UTC? Starting with what is UTC (a single sentence) would make the rest of this section more clear. Is there a normative ref or informative ref? Sub-task Closed Toby Considine
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      Section 5 - Conformance and Rules Sub-task Closed Toby Considine

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