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Page 73 - remove spurious footnote |
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Line 2618 - delete "Semantic" from section header |
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Line 1662-1663 - change "...in such a way." to "...in this manner." |
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Line 1655 - "time-stamp" - remove hyphen, use space |
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Line 1646 - "accuracy" has an unmatched opening parenthesis mark. - add closing parethesis |
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Line 1644 - "time-stamp" - remove hyphen, use space |
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Line 1642-1644 - "It is not...that it caused." |
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Line 1640 - strike "in smart grids" |
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Line 1324 - "it's" to "its" (remove apostrophe) |
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Line 1323 - "start-times" - remove hyphen, use space |
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Line 881 - a comma, not a period, following "...but not both," - change to period |
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Line 881 - two periods following "...unavailable.." |
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Line 847 - "...are used to referencing and bind the..." - change "referencing" to "reference" |
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Line 371 - missing period at end of sentence |
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Line 368, 858 - inconsistent italicization of "Mandatory" and "Optional" in these and other tables where the terms are employed |
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Line 332 - redundant reference - delete sentence and put "[ISO8601]" in line 317 as a replacement for "ISO 8601" |
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Line 263, 266 - use of personal pronoun "you" - reword sentences to eliminate personal pronoun use. |
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Line 198 - footnote 6 wording - change to "...are as defined in [SOA-RM]." |
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Line 186 - citation in Table 1-4 for RFC5545 does not follow the OASIS convention - change to [RFC5545] |
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Line 1646 - the "Note" for "accuracy" uses the abbreviation "resp." without defining it anywhere in the document. |
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Line 1646 - The "Note" for "timestamp" states "May include two objects as defined above." What two objects? Where above? The "Definition" is "WS-Calendar:time". |
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Line 531-532, 606 - line 606 appears superfluous with lines 531-532. |
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Line 461 - The title of Section 3.1 is "Intervals, Temporal Relations, and Sequences" with "Intervals" occurring as Section 3.1.2 and "Sequences-Combining Intervals" occurring as Section 3.1.4. |
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Line 385-386 - This is the first occurrence of using "note" text after an example. The note text is actually useful to parse the example and would be better served before the example. |
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Line 277 - "While this specification the use of core semantic elements from iCalendar," is unclear as written. |
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Line 209 - "This work provides the vocabulary..." is vague. To which work is it referring? Both preceding references? - clarify reference |
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Line 2673 - this item appears to be part of 5.2.3 - make this section 5.2.3.3 rather than 5.2.4 and rename to "Bound Intervals and Sequences in WS-Calendar" |
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Line 2662 - this item appears to align with item #5 in the bulleted list in 5.2 (line 2625) - make this section 5.2.5 and rename to "Semantic Conformance in WS-Calendar" |
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Line 2690-2697 - this section is listed as item #3 in the bulleted list in 5.2 (line 2623) yet appears after the #4 and #5 bulleted items - make this section 5.2.3 |
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Line 1646 - table heading uses "aspects", column heading uses "element" - make consistent |
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Line 1020 - is it "Designated Interval" or "designated Interval"? - employ correct term and make consistent throughout document |
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Line 822, 834 - is it "Designated Interval" or "designated Interval"? - employ correct term and make consistent throughout document |
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Line 858 - [RFC5998] is incorrect - SHOULD BE [RFC5545] |
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Line 457 - "Components" as a keyword (used with capitalization) is undefined in the document - either define or change to "components" |
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Line 392 - [RFC5998] is incorrect - SHOULD BE [RFC5988] |
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Line 390 - parent, child and sibling are not defined in the cited Web Linking RFC but rather in RFC 5545 |
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Line 389 - "Web Link [RFC5998]" is incorrect. |
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Line 368 - [RFC5998] is incorrect |
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Line 317, 332 - [ISO8601] is missing in section 1.2 |
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Line 259 - the correct term is "Daylight Saving Time" without the "s" on "Saving" |
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Line 227 - "OASIS Reference Model for Service Oriented Architecture" is footnoted with a pointer to section 1.2 rather than having an explicit [REFERENCE] like other normative references. |
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Line 71 - RFC2447 (from 11/1998, not 12/2009 as cited) is a "proposed standard" that furthermore has been obseleted by RFC 6047 (http://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc2447) |
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Line 229-236 - This italicized text appears to be a quote from a reference. |
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Line 387 - The title of Section 3.1 is "Intervals, Temporal Relations, and Sequences" with "Intervals" occurring as Section 3.1.2 and "Sequences-Combining Intervals" occurring as Section 3.1.4. "Temporal Relations" is not explicitly Section 3.1.3. |
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