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    • Type: Improvement
    • Resolution: Applied
    • Priority: Major
    • wd21
    • Affects Version/s: pr02
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      1.
      		 Page 73 - remove spurious footnote Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      2.
      		 Line 2618 - delete "Semantic" from section header Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      3.
      		 Line 1662-1663 - change "...in such a way." to "...in this manner." Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      4.
      		 Line 1655 - "time-stamp" - remove hyphen, use space Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      5.
      		 Line 1646 - "accuracy" has an unmatched opening parenthesis mark. - add closing parethesis Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
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      		 Line 1644 - "time-stamp" - remove hyphen, use space Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      7.
      		 Line 1642-1644 - "It is not...that it caused." Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      8.
      		 Line 1640 - strike "in smart grids" Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      9.
      		 Line 1324 - "it's" to "its" (remove apostrophe) Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      10.
      		 Line 1323 - "start-times" - remove hyphen, use space Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      11.
      		 Line 881 - a comma, not a period, following "...but not both," - change to period Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      12.
      		 Line 881 - two periods following "...unavailable.." Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      13.
      		 Line 847 - "...are used to referencing and bind the..." - change "referencing" to "reference" Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      14.
      		 Line 371 - missing period at end of sentence Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      15.
      		 Line 368, 858 - inconsistent italicization of "Mandatory" and "Optional" in these and other tables where the terms are employed Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      16.
      		 Line 332 - redundant reference - delete sentence and put "[ISO8601]" in line 317 as a replacement for "ISO 8601" Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      17.
      		 Line 263, 266 - use of personal pronoun "you" - reword sentences to eliminate personal pronoun use. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      18.
      		 Line 198 - footnote 6 wording - change to "...are as defined in [SOA-RM]." Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      19.
      		 Line 186 - citation in Table 1-4 for RFC5545 does not follow the OASIS convention - change to [RFC5545] Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      20.
      		 Line 1646 - the "Note" for "accuracy" uses the abbreviation "resp." without defining it anywhere in the document. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      21.
      		 Line 1646 - The "Note" for "timestamp" states "May include two objects as defined above." What two objects? Where above? The "Definition" is "WS-Calendar:time". Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      22.
      		 Line 531-532, 606 - line 606 appears superfluous with lines 531-532. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      23.
      		 Line 461 - The title of Section 3.1 is "Intervals, Temporal Relations, and Sequences" with "Intervals" occurring as Section 3.1.2 and "Sequences-Combining Intervals" occurring as Section 3.1.4. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      24.
      		 Line 385-386 - This is the first occurrence of using "note" text after an example. The note text is actually useful to parse the example and would be better served before the example. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      25.
      		 Line 277 - "While this specification the use of core semantic elements from iCalendar," is unclear as written. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      26.
      		 Line 209 - "This work provides the vocabulary..." is vague. To which work is it referring? Both preceding references? - clarify reference Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      27.
      		 Line 2673 - this item appears to be part of 5.2.3 - make this section 5.2.3.3 rather than 5.2.4 and rename to "Bound Intervals and Sequences in WS-Calendar" Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      28.
      		 Line 2662 - this item appears to align with item #5 in the bulleted list in 5.2 (line 2625) - make this section 5.2.5 and rename to "Semantic Conformance in WS-Calendar" Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      29.
      		 Line 2690-2697 - this section is listed as item #3 in the bulleted list in 5.2 (line 2623) yet appears after the #4 and #5 bulleted items - make this section 5.2.3 Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      30.
      		 Line 1646 - table heading uses "aspects", column heading uses "element" - make consistent Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      31.
      		 Line 1020 - is it "Designated Interval" or "designated Interval"? - employ correct term and make consistent throughout document Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      32.
      		 Line 822, 834 - is it "Designated Interval" or "designated Interval"? - employ correct term and make consistent throughout document Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      33.
      		 Line 858 - [RFC5998] is incorrect - SHOULD BE [RFC5545] Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      34.
      		 Line 457 - "Components" as a keyword (used with capitalization) is undefined in the document - either define or change to "components" Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      35.
      		 Line 392 - [RFC5998] is incorrect - SHOULD BE [RFC5988] Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      36.
      		 Line 390 - parent, child and sibling are not defined in the cited Web Linking RFC but rather in RFC 5545 Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      37.
      		 Line 389 - "Web Link [RFC5998]" is incorrect. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      38.
      		 Line 368 - [RFC5998] is incorrect Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      39.
      		 Line 317, 332 - [ISO8601] is missing in section 1.2 Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      40.
      		 Line 259 - the correct term is "Daylight Saving Time" without the "s" on "Saving" Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      41.
      		 Line 227 - "OASIS Reference Model for Service Oriented Architecture" is footnoted with a pointer to section 1.2 rather than having an explicit [REFERENCE] like other normative references. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      42.
      		 Line 71 - RFC2447 (from 11/1998, not 12/2009 as cited) is a "proposed standard" that furthermore has been obseleted by RFC 6047 (http://www.rfc-editor.org/info/rfc2447) Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      43.
      		 Line 229-236 - This italicized text appears to be a quote from a reference. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)
      44.
      		 Line 387 - The title of Section 3.1 is "Intervals, Temporal Relations, and Sequences" with "Intervals" occurring as Section 3.1.2 and "Sequences-Combining Intervals" occurring as Section 3.1.4. "Temporal Relations" is not explicitly Section 3.1.3. Sub-task Closed Toby Considine (Inactive)

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